chapter Fourteen page three
posted 8th Apr 2019, 4:11 PM
user comments
8th Apr 2019, 4:21 PM
joeyballast
I do love that harp :)
Also the dramatic irony. Mountains in fantasy stories are NEVER a good idea.
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 5:03 PM
Saeriellyn
It is something of a trope, isn’t it? When in doubt, avoid the mountains. Also the woods.
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 10:13 PM
Honzinator
But the swamps of home … are thicker than blooood!
Also avoid sea voyages, desert treks, tundra, cave system, secret passages … and hives of scum and villainy! Definitely those.
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 5:00 PM
RhymesoftheRenegades
I love Eilonwy in the last two panels. "I'm not saying that's a good idea, but that's a good idea."
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 6:31 PM
Saeriellyn
Can’t go throwing around compliments like candy or certain people might get cocky.
end of message
9th Apr 2019, 4:03 AM
CM
Better say it into a cup, as well. Don't want the wrong people to hear.
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 5:37 PM
Rob S.
I love Eilonwy's eye-roll in the second-to-last panel. And oh, the harp!
If you don't mind my offering one criticism, the words in Medwyn's word balloon in the second panel are perilously close to the edge -- you might want to give them a little more room to breathe if you ever go back to the file to clean it up.
Loving it as always -- so glad you're back in gear!
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 6:35 PM
Saeriellyn
Don’t mind constructive crit at all! You’re right on that - I’ll have to nudge it.
end of message
8th Apr 2019, 6:40 PM
Saeriellyn
If you look carefully, he’s had shadow since the beginning and has been slowly stubbling ever since. All in the name of realism!
end of message
9th Apr 2019, 2:39 AM
CA
Nice work! Been a bit since I've been able to check-in, but I love the the last few panels. Will be sad to leave the valley, but excited to see where you take the story in the upcoming chapters.
end of message
9th Apr 2019, 10:46 AM
Saeriellyn
I’m always glad to move on to a new setting - especially after as many pages as this one has gone through! The valley has been a rest for them, but my work goes on...
end of message
10th Apr 2019, 3:23 AM
CA
For sure! I know this passage took a little longer than you had hoped, but in a way it was kind of fitting. Gave the illusion of time passing slower in Medwyn's valley, which would make perfect sense.
end of message
12th Apr 2019, 1:56 AM
Skyboy91
I like the idea of time passing more slowly in Medwyn's valley...sort of like Lothlorien, also a place of rest and rejuvenation, and both controlled by beings of great power.
end of message
rate this page:
average rating: 5
average rating: 5
author comments