Chapter Eleven: Page 1

posted 25th May 2017, 11:34 AM

Chapter Eleven: Page 1
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25th May 2017, 11:34 AM

Saeriellyn

On the move again!

In the book, Taran's words here are an internal dialog, but I have this weird dislike of thought bubbles so I don't use them much. Seemed more interesting, for this medium, to have him baring his soul to one of his companions, and Eilonwy's still too angry for that, so...Fflewddur it is.

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25th May 2017, 1:35 PM

QueenB

Love the hair.

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25th May 2017, 6:52 PM

Saeriellyn

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25th May 2017, 2:57 PM

Lori

The forest in the first panel is just lovely, looks like you can truly walk right into it. Great detail and depth. I like the way Fflewddur goes from cheerful and bouncy to wryly observant in a heartbeat. Taran all broody - he the most angsty boy in the land. I do have some concern that Melyngar is going to turn her head and get stabbed in the eye with a spear-tip.

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25th May 2017, 6:52 PM

Saeriellyn

That forest is straight from one of my photos taken in Wales. References are everything.

Good point on Melyngar! lol I will have to adjust the placement of those spears.

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25th May 2017, 4:26 PM

CM

Taran: I wish Gwydion were here.

Ffledawgh: Ah naw, foo, he dead.

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25th May 2017, 6:53 PM

Saeriellyn

lol true. I guess that would make him cauldron-born at this point, and we don't want that.

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26th May 2017, 5:46 AM

CM

Cauldron born Gwydion would be extra unstoppable, I suppose.

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25th May 2017, 7:59 PM

joeyballast

I think you made the right call with the dialogue instead of the thought bubble. Then again, I just don't like thought bubbles in general, so I'm a tad biased.

Fflewddur (I keep wanting to leave out a 'd' when spelling his name...) really thinks he knows his stuff. I REALLY wouldn't know if he were a complete charlatan without the harp chiming in once in a while.

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25th May 2017, 9:58 PM

RHYMESOFTHERENEGADES

"I wish Gwydion was here."

Spits hair out of mouth

"With a pair of shears."

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