Chapter Ten: page two

posted 23rd Mar 2017, 11:32 AM

Chapter Ten: page two
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23rd Mar 2017, 11:32 AM

Saeriellyn

Take note, gentlemen. Girls /love/ it when you try to tell them what to do with their own things and talk as though they aren't there.

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23rd Mar 2017, 11:41 AM

mjkj

*lol* it is Eilonwy's sword - you can not decide for her...

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23rd Mar 2017, 12:43 PM

Saeriellyn

She'll be making that very clear in the next page! :D

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23rd Mar 2017, 2:27 PM

LMS

This is a fantastic page. Gurgi still trying to snatch Eilonwy's breakfast, Eilonwy trying very hard to protect Taran from his own stupidity, Taran misunderstanding at first and trying to reassure Eilonwy that she's not under Achren's control anymore (which she actually might need to hear). There's so much going on, and you've rendered it so well.

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23rd Mar 2017, 5:14 PM

Saeriellyn

Busy page! The next few will be. The story is meaty here, and I'm trying to cram so as not to get bogged down, and sometimes I fear I'm trying to fit too much into one page. Glad it's working for you!

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23rd Mar 2017, 4:59 PM

RHYMESOFTHERENEGADES

If I didn't already know how it all ended I'd be with Fflewddur on this. For all they know that sword belonged to Achren's ancient boyfriend (would that be a correct description of Arawn). Plus, taking it in the first place was kind of grave-robbing.

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23rd Mar 2017, 5:16 PM

Saeriellyn

Jilted ex-lover? Except he did the jilting. I don't know what to call the jilt-ee. lol

Fflewddur is a cautious soul, but grave-robbing is practical when you need a good defense and have no other options. ;)

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23rd Mar 2017, 6:37 PM

xianyu118

To be honest I'd actually ask her to chuck it back into the grave...or is it rubble pile? anyway, because she technically did do a bit of grave-robbing while escaping.

But then who knows what taking the sword has gotten her into?

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23rd Mar 2017, 7:48 PM

Saeriellyn

Taran robbed the grave too, but I don't see anybody telling him to put his sword back! :P lol

Taking the sword is a major, major plot point, actually, the full ramifications of which won't be known for another four books. I'll probably never get that far, so you'll have to get 'em from the library if you really want to know. ;)

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23rd Mar 2017, 10:07 PM

Odd May

Eilonwy's so done in the last panel. She better learn to deal, 'cause she'll be living with these two on and off for the rest of her life.

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24th Mar 2017, 12:08 AM

Saeriellyn

True, but they get easier to deal with. One of them, anyway. ;)

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24th Mar 2017, 3:54 PM

Meg

The expressions are just priceless. Poor Eilonwy. Good thing she can stand up for herself b/c the boys are doing a good job steam rolling her. I like how you are putting it together.

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24th Mar 2017, 9:48 PM

Saeriellyn

I had a lot of fun with this one. All the character interactions are my favorite parts of this series.

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24th Mar 2017, 4:40 PM

Centcomm

that last panel.. hehehe.. well done .. very well done.

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24th Mar 2017, 9:36 PM

Saeriellyn

That last panel is pretty much the whole reason for this page. Lol

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