Chapter Ten: page one

posted 20th Mar 2017, 12:54 PM

Chapter Ten: page one
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20th Mar 2017, 12:54 PM

Saeriellyn

Forest inspiration brought to you by Ty Canol woods of Pembrokeshire, where the moss really is deep enough to sleep on, though the flying ants would have made it unpleasant when we were there.

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20th Mar 2017, 1:10 PM

Lori

Lovely forest. Gurgi crunching away. Eilonwy finally has a chance to get a good look at that sword and recognizes that it's unusual. Methinks an argument is about to commence, underscored by the fact that once again, the girl is smarter than both of the guys combined. :)

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20th Mar 2017, 1:16 PM

Saeriellyn

Yes!! I am having so much fun plotting out the next couple of pages. ;)

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20th Mar 2017, 1:55 PM

thing 1

"You must do what you feel is right, of course."

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20th Mar 2017, 2:00 PM

Saeriellyn

Standard fantasy dialog 101. ;)

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20th Mar 2017, 2:27 PM

The Doodler

Dang, I smelled dew when I saw that first panel.

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20th Mar 2017, 2:35 PM

Saeriellyn

Ha!! The stuff you don't think about. Waking up damp and chilly...though it wouldn't have been much better in your average castle.

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20th Mar 2017, 4:31 PM

RHYMESOFTHERENEGADES

"I WILL TAKE IT! I will take the news to Caer Dathyl! Though I do not no the way?"

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20th Mar 2017, 5:55 PM

Saeriellyn

The parallels, they just keeps coming, Precious!!!

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21st Mar 2017, 12:52 AM

Odd May

Ooh fun scene coming. Color again! I love it! The sunny morning background in panel one is so pretty. Also, can we appreciate the fact that Eilonwy has perfect hair after a night of sleeping in the woods? My hair is starting to be around the length of hers, but if I had a nickel for every time I woke up with my head looking like the nest of a bird with terrible design sense...

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21st Mar 2017, 1:24 PM

Saeriellyn

I am betraying my usual sense of realism with her hair, I know, but it's just so darn pretty I can't help myself. As one who has lived with the glorious inconvenience of waist-length hair myself, I'll have her bowing to its demands eventually, but I wanted at least a few pages of seeing it in daylight. :)

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21st Mar 2017, 6:24 AM

joeyballast

First panel is BEAUTiful. The colours are just right. I really get that sense of dew-filled dawn.

I know that they've probably given Gurgi something to eat, but I can't help imagining in the second panel that he's found some hapless squirrel or bird's nest or something. It really makes that expression of satisfaction on his face in the third panel that much more... distressing.

Awesome as always!

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21st Mar 2017, 1:27 PM

Saeriellyn

I guess Gurgi probably does live on stolen eggs, small mammals....probably insects and larvae and berries as well, when there are no people around he can mooch off of! They ought to make use of his hunting abilities.

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23rd Mar 2017, 11:39 AM

mjkj

So, what did she find out about the sword?

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23rd Mar 2017, 5:17 PM

Saeriellyn

Not much, yet, but we'll get there.

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27th Apr 2017, 7:38 AM

BlueDragon

Oh Gurgi...you don't want to take her apple. You just don't ;P

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