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Go go go!
I love how you did the last chapter and introduced the bard (again, I prefer your version):)
Over Disney's? Theirs is so awful it's hard NOT to improve him. He's a stand-in for the author as far as physical appearance, and that they turned him into a fat paunchy old man is just insulting.
And dumb! Disney made him dumb as hell (I can tolerate a fat paunchy old man, but a dumb one? noooooooo!)