Chapter Twelve Page 11

posted 20th Nov 2017, 12:52 PM

Chapter Twelve Page 11
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20th Nov 2017, 12:52 PM

Saeriellyn

Milestone: first makeup attempt. Won't be the last. First rule: don't send her to bed angry...

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20th Nov 2017, 3:16 PM

LMS

You don't count his apology after accusing her of betraying him at Spiral Castle? Maybe I wouldn't either--at that point he was more concerned with his own bad behavior than with getting back in her good graces.

At any rate, I love this page. The stars make me wish once again I had a telescope and lived in a place where the light pollution didn't keep me from seeing them. Taran looks very young when he walks up to Eilonwy, like a little puppy--"Please don't hurt me. Please forgive me." Eilonwy, in contrast, looks very regal and severe, and the tree in the last two panels works well as a symbol of the division between them.

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20th Nov 2017, 3:31 PM

Saeriellyn

Wellllll....I guess that one counts...but yeah, in that scene, though he is genuinely sorry he accused her falsely, it's really more about being ashamed of himself, while in this instance it's motivated out of a pure desire to heal the breach, since he didn't actually do anything wrong but managed to tick her off anyway.

I didn't even think about the tree being symbolic, but you're right. I'm gonna pretend that was my intention now. ;)

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20th Nov 2017, 10:18 PM

CM

I thought the same thing about the tree. Hurrah for the subconscious!

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20th Nov 2017, 3:31 PM

mjkj

Beautiful night sky <3

...and again beautiful Eilonwy <3

Well, Taran, what are you waiting for? apologize and explain yourself... =P

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20th Nov 2017, 4:22 PM

Saeriellyn

He's gotta get his courage up for it...

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21st Nov 2017, 1:07 AM

RhymesoftheRenegades

Although it doesn't quite fit the mood, that last panel makes me think of the love song from Quest For Camelot

"Here in the night, I see the sun
Here in the dark our two hearts are one
It's out of our hands, we can't stop what we have begun
And love just took me by surprise, looking through your eyes"

Also hilarious that their having this serious moment, but they also have to listen to Fflewdur's snoring. Or is that Gurgi?

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21st Nov 2017, 11:36 AM

Saeriellyn

I’ve never seen that film, but those are beautiful lyrics.

And yes, that’s Fflewddur sawing logs. Text mentions it, does something humorous with it in a few pages. Fflewddur’s snoring has become a permanent piece of head canon for me. It figures prominently in one of my favorite fanfic scenes. ;)

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21st Nov 2017, 6:40 PM

joeyballast

I do love your night scenes. They've got that perfect hue of moonlight blue-grey if you get what I mean.

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