Chapter 13 page 19

posted 6th Dec 2018, 12:10 AM

Chapter 13 page 19
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6th Dec 2018, 12:10 AM

Saeriellyn

Yes that would be two pages in two days YOU ARE WELCOME.

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6th Dec 2018, 1:18 AM

Skyboy91

Fantastic, Thank You! And great pages they are too. I really like the scene from the perspective of the ark.

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6th Dec 2018, 12:03 PM

Saeriellyn

Yes that's my favorite in this page - mainly bc after like six pages of Medwyn and Taran being talking heads, I'm hunting desperately for alternative perspectives, and this one was such an obvious, easy one.

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6th Dec 2018, 2:43 PM

LMS

"Kid, you may never see your home and your parental figures again. I wouldn't worry about it." Can you tell Medwyn isn't really used to dealing with humans?

Beautiful page. You're really cranking them out! I appreciate it.

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6th Dec 2018, 4:02 PM

Saeriellyn

I hate that I got so far behind. Between projects now and really want to get through this scene.

I think Medwyn is a real live in the moment type. Rather like the animals. It's one of the things that makes him commune so well with them.

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6th Dec 2018, 4:17 PM

Honzinator

You've got a family and other responsibilities … I am thrilled you do any of this at all.

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6th Dec 2018, 6:10 PM

Saeriellyn

Thank you. :) This is my break from my responsibilities, though, not an added stress. The only time it gives me any negativity is when other parts of life are making me depressed and then I am upset about my lack of energy to pursue this project. That was the case for the last couple of months and now I am climbing out of it.

When you guys see me pumping out pages, you can know that my life is going very well. It's when long unexplained silences occur that I'm probably struggling with something.

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6th Dec 2018, 4:33 PM

LMS

Seconded. Don't put too much pressure on yourself.

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6th Dec 2018, 7:39 PM

CM

Medwyn be channeling some serious Gandalf here.

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7th Dec 2018, 2:49 AM

CA

You've done such a good job with this chapter. I feel like Medwyn is an underrated mentor for Taran. Maybe not as significant as Dalben, Gwydion, or a couple others, but he definitely plays a big role in his life and character arc. You've done great bringing that to life here.

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7th Dec 2018, 7:11 PM

Saeriellyn

Thank you! There’s a lot to unpack with Medwyn in a short time frame, and I wish it had more action than it does, but I’ve done my best with it!

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10th Dec 2018, 4:40 AM

Skye

I always enjoyed this part of the book. In addition to Taran learning a bit more it is also such a great world building sequence as well. There is history and myths beyond the scope of this story. Alexander does a great job of giving the reader just enough to be able to fill in some blanks but also leaving some mystery for the imagination.

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13th Dec 2018, 12:04 AM

Guest

The deer in that page looks lovely! I love your work and I hope you can do more great pages like this one in the future.

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