The Book of Three

fan adaptation of the first novel in The Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander

Chapter Two: Page One

posted 7th Feb 2015, 12:18 AM

Chapter Two: Page One
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15th Feb 2020, 4:31 PM

MattSchofield

Really like the layout on this page! It enhances the “lost in the forest” feeling . Bravo!

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15th Feb 2020, 11:46 PM

Saeriellyn

Thanks! I like to play with various layouts and framing effects...less of it now since I usually work vertically, but at this point I was still cramming stuff into a standard print size.

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6th Apr 2020, 3:25 AM

Noah D Henson (Guest)

I cannot describe to you how much I love this page. I can see that your draftsmanship, at this point, still had room for improvement... but never mind that. The conception of the page layout is ingenious; you've brilliantly captured the mood, the feeling of being lost in the woods. Again the sound effects are unique to each specific noise, and I appreciate that rather than the cloud-form "thought bubble" commonly used in comics, you've opted for a kind of ghostly caption box to convey Taran's inner thoughts. The whole is wonderful, simply wonderful.

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