chapter Fourteen page three

posted 8th Apr 2019, 4:11 PM

chapter Fourteen page three
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8th Apr 2019, 4:11 PM

Saeriellyn

Been a while since we heard from the harp.

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8th Apr 2019, 4:21 PM

joeyballast

I do love that harp :)

Also the dramatic irony. Mountains in fantasy stories are NEVER a good idea.

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8th Apr 2019, 5:03 PM

Saeriellyn

It is something of a trope, isn’t it? When in doubt, avoid the mountains. Also the woods.

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8th Apr 2019, 10:13 PM

Honzinator

But the swamps of home … are thicker than blooood!
Also avoid sea voyages, desert treks, tundra, cave system, secret passages … and hives of scum and villainy! Definitely those.

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9th Apr 2019, 10:44 AM

Saeriellyn

We should all just stay home!!

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8th Apr 2019, 5:00 PM

RhymesoftheRenegades

I love Eilonwy in the last two panels. "I'm not saying that's a good idea, but that's a good idea."

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8th Apr 2019, 6:31 PM

Saeriellyn

Can’t go throwing around compliments like candy or certain people might get cocky.

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9th Apr 2019, 4:03 AM

CM

Better say it into a cup, as well. Don't want the wrong people to hear.

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9th Apr 2019, 10:49 AM

Saeriellyn

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8th Apr 2019, 5:37 PM

Rob S.

I love Eilonwy's eye-roll in the second-to-last panel. And oh, the harp!

If you don't mind my offering one criticism, the words in Medwyn's word balloon in the second panel are perilously close to the edge -- you might want to give them a little more room to breathe if you ever go back to the file to clean it up.

Loving it as always -- so glad you're back in gear!

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8th Apr 2019, 6:35 PM

Saeriellyn

Don’t mind constructive crit at all! You’re right on that - I’ll have to nudge it.

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8th Apr 2019, 6:29 PM

Anonymous

So, you’ve given Fflewddur a beard now?

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8th Apr 2019, 6:40 PM

Saeriellyn

If you look carefully, he’s had shadow since the beginning and has been slowly stubbling ever since. All in the name of realism!

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9th Apr 2019, 2:39 AM

CA

Nice work! Been a bit since I've been able to check-in, but I love the the last few panels. Will be sad to leave the valley, but excited to see where you take the story in the upcoming chapters.

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9th Apr 2019, 10:46 AM

Saeriellyn

I’m always glad to move on to a new setting - especially after as many pages as this one has gone through! The valley has been a rest for them, but my work goes on...

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10th Apr 2019, 3:23 AM

CA

For sure! I know this passage took a little longer than you had hoped, but in a way it was kind of fitting. Gave the illusion of time passing slower in Medwyn's valley, which would make perfect sense.

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9th Apr 2019, 5:08 PM

Brian

Beautiful job! So happy to see another page!

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12th Apr 2019, 1:56 AM

Skyboy91

I like the idea of time passing more slowly in Medwyn's valley...sort of like Lothlorien, also a place of rest and rejuvenation, and both controlled by beings of great power.

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17th Apr 2019, 11:31 AM

Maggie

I read this whole thing in TWO DAYS! SOOOO GOOD :)

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23rd Apr 2019, 12:46 AM

Arianllyn

Ack! They all look so cool. Well, I guess it is time for our heroes to be off once again. Though they look much more refreshed from their stay in Medwyn's valley. I really love your characterizations of them all. My headcanon Fflewdeur is the only one that looks a bit different from your imagining of him, though yours is top notch as well. I always imagined Fflewdeur as something of a blond Adrian Brody. in fact, though he usually does dramas, I think he would make an amazing Fflewdeur in a live action version! What do you think of him? [img]https://www.pinterest.com/pin/558376053777439427[/img]
[img]https://www.pinterest.com/pin/219057969347095228[/img]

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