chapter Fourteen page three
posted 8th Apr 2019, 4:11 PM
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8th Apr 2019, 4:21 PM
joeyballast
I do love that harp :)
Also the dramatic irony. Mountains in fantasy stories are NEVER a good idea.
8th Apr 2019, 5:03 PM
Saeriellyn
It is something of a trope, isn’t it? When in doubt, avoid the mountains. Also the woods.
8th Apr 2019, 10:13 PM
Honzinator (Guest)
But the swamps of home … are thicker than blooood!
Also avoid sea voyages, desert treks, tundra, cave system, secret passages … and hives of scum and villainy! Definitely those.
8th Apr 2019, 5:00 PM
RhymesoftheRenegades (Guest)
I love Eilonwy in the last two panels. "I'm not saying that's a good idea, but that's a good idea."
8th Apr 2019, 6:31 PM
Saeriellyn
Can’t go throwing around compliments like candy or certain people might get cocky.
9th Apr 2019, 4:03 AM
CM (Guest)
8th Apr 2019, 5:37 PM
Rob S. (Guest)
I love Eilonwy's eye-roll in the second-to-last panel. And oh, the harp!
If you don't mind my offering one criticism, the words in Medwyn's word balloon in the second panel are perilously close to the edge -- you might want to give them a little more room to breathe if you ever go back to the file to clean it up.
Loving it as always -- so glad you're back in gear!
8th Apr 2019, 6:35 PM
Saeriellyn
Don’t mind constructive crit at all! You’re right on that - I’ll have to nudge it.
8th Apr 2019, 6:29 PM
Anonymous (Guest)
8th Apr 2019, 6:40 PM
Saeriellyn
If you look carefully, he’s had shadow since the beginning and has been slowly stubbling ever since. All in the name of realism!
9th Apr 2019, 2:39 AM
CA (Guest)
Nice work! Been a bit since I've been able to check-in, but I love the the last few panels. Will be sad to leave the valley, but excited to see where you take the story in the upcoming chapters.
9th Apr 2019, 10:46 AM
Saeriellyn
I’m always glad to move on to a new setting - especially after as many pages as this one has gone through! The valley has been a rest for them, but my work goes on...
10th Apr 2019, 3:23 AM
CA (Guest)
For sure! I know this passage took a little longer than you had hoped, but in a way it was kind of fitting. Gave the illusion of time passing slower in Medwyn's valley, which would make perfect sense.
9th Apr 2019, 5:08 PM
Brian (Guest)
12th Apr 2019, 1:56 AM
Skyboy91
I like the idea of time passing more slowly in Medwyn's valley...sort of like Lothlorien, also a place of rest and rejuvenation, and both controlled by beings of great power.
17th Apr 2019, 11:31 AM
Maggie (Guest)
23rd Apr 2019, 12:46 AM
Arianllyn
Ack! They all look so cool. Well, I guess it is time for our heroes to be off once again. Though they look much more refreshed from their stay in Medwyn's valley. I really love your characterizations of them all. My headcanon Fflewdeur is the only one that looks a bit different from your imagining of him, though yours is top notch as well. I always imagined Fflewdeur as something of a blond Adrian Brody. in fact, though he usually does dramas, I think he would make an amazing Fflewdeur in a live action version! What do you think of him? [img]https://www.pinterest.com/pin/558376053777439427[/img]
[img]https://www.pinterest.com/pin/219057969347095228[/img]
13th Feb 2020, 5:30 AM
BlueDragon
Ha ha! I love how the harp plings in the background XD
I know, it's been a while since I commented. I just now have time to catch up.
(And by "have time," I mean,screw everything else, I've been missing this comic based on one of my favorite books/series of all time!)
13th Feb 2020, 11:29 AM
Saeriellyn
lol thanks! It's probably not a bad way to do things, waiting a while and then binge-reading - at least you get a good sense of continuity then!
19th Apr 2020, 2:08 PM
Leader Dessler
That's the second time she approves (her way) of one of Taran's ideas. It should make his head scratch.
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