The Book of Three

fan adaptation of the first novel in The Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander

Chapter Fifteen page 9

posted 20th Jan 2020, 2:49 AM

Chapter Fifteen page 9
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20th Jan 2020, 2:49 AM

Saeriellyn

I am positive that everything Eiddileg says is accompanied by wild helicoptering of his arms. I just picture him bouncing around like the ball in a pinball machine, flailing his tiny arms and raging. It makes it really hard to believe they are in actual danger, but...there it is. He makes me giggle.

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20th Jan 2020, 3:31 AM

StLOrca

I’m hearing Eric Idle or Michael Palin as the ranty king.

And as usual, this is a beautiful page.

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20th Jan 2020, 10:12 PM

Saeriellyn

Wait until you hear what we’ve got for the audiodrama. It was unexpected, but it works.

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20th Jan 2020, 4:36 AM

Slim Kittens

"I'm surrounded by idiots!"

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20th Jan 2020, 10:12 PM

Saeriellyn

It’s a rough life.

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20th Jan 2020, 2:12 PM

Kristofilus

Eilonwy being the type to mouth off to King of the Fairfolk in his own chambers is what makes her my hero.

"helicoptering" hahaha!

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20th Jan 2020, 10:11 PM

Saeriellyn

It’s shocking he doesn’t fire back at her in some tangible way, but of course we know by the end he’s got a soft spot for pretty girls, or maybe just her.

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22nd Jan 2020, 2:25 PM

Eiddileg and Eilonwy (Guest)

I wonder how much of his soft spot for her is because of her inherent and innate magic, and how much is because she resembles some of the fey (again, in large part because of her semi-divine inheritance).
A lot of his non-apparent work is surely eldritch, and I wonder if crankiness helps fuel it, as the whole cyclical emotionalism thing (I'm like one of those mainlanders in embarassment) does that of the ladies of Lyr.
You have a really good sense of Alexander's personality, because HE clearly thought the wee king hilarious atop a layer of threat, atop a deeper layer of kindness (an odd quality for one of the fey - perhaps it is why he's king, even though it embarrasses him in front of the other faeries?), and not everyone could pull off the humour.

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22nd Jan 2020, 2:35 PM

Saeriellyn

Possibly? I have my own pet theory about why he might take a special shine to her, and it involves the as-yet-ephemeral sequel I have in mind to that Llyrian story. Let's just say in my mind, G/A are not dead despite falling afoul of Morda, but their long disappearance from Prydain and failure to track down their daughter is because they are surviving/trapped Somewhere Else, at least for a while. Eiddileg may recognize Eilonwy, knows the connection, but keeps his peace for Reasons of his own. Haven't decided all the ins and outs, but there you go.

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26th Mar 2021, 11:01 PM

Guest

Oh, please post that sequel! I read Daughter of the Sea on Wattpad and thoroughly enjoyed it, and I desperately want more content!

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26th Mar 2021, 11:03 PM

Saeriellyn

Ahh, a Wattpad fan?! It’s so hard to tell if I’ve got much audience over there. Welcome!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

And I will almost certainly post a sequel if I can just nail down the story. But I have a lot of other Eilonwy-centric things to get through first. ☺️

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20th Jan 2020, 2:43 PM

MK_Wizard

So far, the only thing I see this guy doing is being a grouch.

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20th Jan 2020, 7:47 PM

Skyboy91

A lot of that is for show, fortunately!

Is it just me or is Eilonwy growing up rapidly? She seems less the child and more the woman here. And a force to be reckoned with for sure.

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20th Jan 2020, 10:10 PM

Saeriellyn

She does look a little older than I intended. I think it’s those eloquent eyebrows.

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23rd Apr 2020, 7:13 AM

Leader Dessler

Eye size makes the difference, I think. She always looks older when she squints.

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20th Jan 2020, 10:13 PM

Saeriellyn

He’s like a CEO; gets paid a lot for nobody-actually-knows-what.

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20th Jan 2020, 10:16 PM

MK_Wizard

Specifically, the worst kind of CEO. I've met responsible and good higher ups and they are not like this guy. Oi vay.

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21st Jan 2020, 9:52 AM

NotTheHarp (Guest)

Whoehie, another page!

Just as a tiny bit of comment, i miss a little bit facial expression on Eiddileg, his face seems very the same to me. But i am no expert or artist.

Thanks for the great job again and again!

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21st Jan 2020, 2:45 PM

Saeriellyn

You caught me! I often copy and paste faces to save time but I usually change expressions, and I forgot to do that here.

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21st Jan 2020, 3:10 PM

NotTheHarp (Guest)

Ah I get it!

But it is also good thing for us eager readers because less works for you mihjt gives us a quicker fix in our hunger to updates hahaha!

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21st Jan 2020, 5:11 PM

Saeriellyn

Exactly! I shouldn’t get lazy though. I’m glad you noticed it - means you are paying attention!

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21st Jan 2020, 2:23 PM

Nano1 (Guest)

What a fun page! I love the lights floating around and casting different shadows in each panel - it really helps capture the otherworldly magical feel of the place, and the coloring is so pretty, as always!

Eiddileg and Eilonwy are hilarious - I love how you've adapted their exchanges here!

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21st Jan 2020, 2:47 PM

Saeriellyn

Thank you! Trying to adapt the dialog in this scene has been a challenge. I’m thankful Eilonwy gets a few digs in so I have something to work with.

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21st Jan 2020, 3:51 PM

Kogarashi (Guest)

Yay, page!

I agree, definitely helicoptering of arms. Bombastic flailing to punctuate every sentence. It's more of that deceptive exterior, hiding the shrewdness beneath.

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21st Jan 2020, 5:12 PM

Saeriellyn

Yes! Though I think he’s a flailer anyway. The silliness is an act but not the frayed nerves.

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13th Apr 2020, 11:20 AM

Saeriellyn

They are in a dark environment, and she’s soaking wet. That’s all - it’ll be back to its brilliance once they are back outside and dry!

As far as her face, just variations of my not being consistent, I’m afraid. That happens with all of them.

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23rd Apr 2020, 7:05 AM

Leader Dessler

Having survived Achren does probably harden you against such little pomps. If Tylwyth Teg is really such a dangerous place, then Eilonwy seems to be pretty oblivious of it, Not only does she manage to slip another "Assistant pig-keeper!" note to Taran despite him having already accepted the blame, she then talks to Eiddileg like he was yet another assistant pig-keeper. - You are trying to scare us? I have gone through worse than that! - I am surprised that she does not refer him to her lineage like she has done on lesser occasions.

Which makes me wonder why Fflewddur keeps so silent and leaves all the talking to the kids. What about an attempt to negotiate among equals, from king to king? Of course, "great gawking scarecrow" is not a headstart for initiating diplomatic relations.

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