Hmm, it's cool the way you painted the water. With just some strokes, you gave the necessary flowing to the movement.
I think the minimalism is my way of avoiding things I’m not sure exactly how to portray! Lol. I’ll probably experiment more when I get to the next water scene, but this worked well enough on this page.
Gwydion's expression in the last panel: "Note to self: stop assuming this kid is capable of things."
Also: Dallben must be out of his mind.