Chapter Five: Page Six

posted 22nd Jan 2016, 1:14 AM

Chapter Five: Page Six
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22nd Jan 2016, 1:14 AM

Saeriellyn

Something wicked this way comes...

My thanks to JoeyBallast for the "throw the sword" idea, which was brilliance.

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22nd Jan 2016, 4:55 AM

joeyballast

Yeah! He totally threw his sword!

I influenced something!

Page looks awesome, by the way!

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1st Feb 2016, 10:07 PM

Saeriellyn

Thanks! It was such a great idea!!

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22nd Jan 2016, 12:03 PM

Odd May

I just screamed, "He threw the sword!" so loud it probably woke half the apartment building, but it was totally worth it!

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1st Feb 2016, 10:07 PM

Saeriellyn

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1st Feb 2016, 6:56 PM

Rob S.

Love the sword throw! These are the kind of elements that make adaptations so fulfilling to read.

And even more so, the blood splatter over Taran's chest. It makes it very palpable the danger he was in, and that he's seen the awful reality of something he's romanticized for so long. A great choice.

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1st Feb 2016, 10:06 PM

Saeriellyn

I'm surprising myself at my willingness to deviate from the text with elements like this, to be honest. I'm always such a book purist, but finding it true that a visual medium is just a very different animal, and opens up such great opportunities for this kind of moment.

Props to you for noting the significance of the end of Taran's innocence re: bloodshed. Those are the kinds of things that go through my mind when I work on this, and it thrills me when others turn out to be on the same wavelength. :)

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22nd Apr 2016, 6:01 AM

Kevin

The depth and perspective. The start of the rain--makes everything more tactile. You've become much more adept at the use of onomatopoeia. Fast learner!

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22nd Apr 2016, 11:32 AM

Saeriellyn

Ha - not really that fast; the work up to this point took well over a year. ;)

Thank you so much for all your comments, Kevin. It thrills me when people take the time to engage so fully, and interact with the material and with me. Hope you continue to read and enjoy.

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