Chapter Five: Page 16

posted 14th Mar 2016, 11:23 AM

Chapter Five: Page 16
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14th Mar 2016, 11:23 AM

Saeriellyn

Not suspicious at all.

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14th Mar 2016, 10:05 PM

Odd May

Oh my God, that background in the fourth panel... I want it as my wallpaper. And I love how you show Achren's magic. Gorgeous! Inside my mind I'm chanting, "Eilonwy! Closer! Eilonwy! Closer!"

Also, just a little thing, are Gwydion's eyes brown in the last panel?

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15th Mar 2016, 11:34 AM

Saeriellyn

You caught the brown eyes! woops. lol. I was attempting to show them in shadow, but it did wind up being the wrong color. I have a couple things in this I need to tweak, so I'll add it to the list!

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15th Mar 2016, 1:10 AM

joeyballast

Whiiiiich one of you has the weakest will...?

Ah. This one.

What a nice, nice lady. Not sinister at all in any way.

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15th Mar 2016, 12:00 PM

Saeriellyn

She's just like a mother, really.

A really, really loving maternal figure for the poor orphan boy.

What could possibly be sinister about that?

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15th Mar 2016, 5:45 PM

Bethany-sensei

In which Taran continues to have a Very Bad Day, but he doesn't know it yet. Poor clueless Taran. :D

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17th Mar 2016, 2:45 PM

Saeriellyn

I don't know. Something rather pivotally positive is going to happen shortly. ;)

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21st Mar 2016, 12:17 PM

Rob S.

Great expressions. I especially love that suspicious glance Gwydion is giving Taran in the last panel.

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21st Mar 2016, 2:30 PM

Saeriellyn

It's supposed to be along the lines of "Oh, please don't be this stupid," but suspicious works, too. ;)

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