Chapter Five: Page Nineteen
posted 4th Apr 2016, 3:51 AM
4th Apr 2016, 3:51 AM
Saeriellyn
Taran, in last panel: not sure exactly what is happening, but pretty sure it will not end well.
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4th Apr 2016, 3:56 AM
joeyballast
Taran appears intensely uncomfortable... I'm sure he'd back away slowly if he could.
4th Apr 2016, 4:00 AM
Saeriellyn
So many things happening that are way beyond this poor boy's ken...yep, I think he'd like to crawl in a hole about now.
4th Apr 2016, 6:14 AM
Rob S. (Guest)
No secret or not, Taran doesn't quite get it yet.
You're really great at ratcheting up the tension with those extreme closeups, btw...
4th Apr 2016, 11:30 AM
Saeriellyn
Closeups, besides being effective at delivering emotion, serve the dual purpose of making it unnecessary to do a lot of background detail, which I despise. Hence my use and possible overuse of them! -artistdirtysecrets
4th Apr 2016, 10:51 AM
Odd May (Guest)
Good lord, Taran looks so adorable on this page. Confused faces for the win! Also, Achren in the last panel is gorgeous,
4th Apr 2016, 11:28 AM
Saeriellyn
Can't you just see him thinking, "um, Gwydion? Is this a good idea? And.../what/ is she, exactly?"
4th Apr 2016, 6:45 PM
RHYMESOFTHERENEGADES (Guest)
Is it just me, or do Achren's lines in the fourth panel, and the way she happens to be positioning the sword hilt, seem very . . . suggestive.
18th Jul 2018, 9:13 PM
Booklover400 (Guest)
30th Apr 2017, 6:14 AM
Freawaru
Don't mind me speeding through to finally catch up.
Goodness, her eyes are amazing.
19th Aug 2020, 9:54 PM
Kfrizzed (Guest)
Finally making my way through all the comments having restarted this from the beginning!
Love Taran’s expression in panel 3 in response to “he is of no consequence”. Ha!
And I think you’ve got the right level of sexual tension between Gwydion and Achren—that suggestion of “maybe in another lifetime” (or a fanfic) ;)
21st Aug 2020, 1:07 AM
Saeriellyn
I have my own thoughts that evolved over time from "that never happened" to "that almost certainly did happen" and it's all thanks to fanfic. ;)
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