The Book of Three

Chapter Five: Page Twenty

posted 11th Apr 2016, 12:49 PM

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11th Apr 2016, 12:49 PM

Saeriellyn

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That went well.

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11th Apr 2016, 12:54 PM

dpat57

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Trouble now! Good sense of movement and danger. He has her exactly where he wants her. :)

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11th Apr 2016, 3:06 PM

Saeriellyn

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Ummmm...actually, no. She is fully in control of this situation. For now. ;)

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11th Apr 2016, 3:48 PM

dpat57

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lol yes, I was just joking, badly. :) This a good read.

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11th Apr 2016, 5:15 PM

Saeriellyn

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lol sorry; I can't keep track of who already knows the story and who doesn't!

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11th Apr 2016, 4:10 PM

thing 1 (Guest)

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and this is all from the book?

nice adaptation.

nice brick pattern too!

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11th Apr 2016, 5:16 PM

Mostly. I have done some truncating and moving things around to suit the visual medium and for efficiency of storytelling, but I'm not fiddling with character or plot, which are perfect as they are.

The brick pattern is a pre-made brush. If I had to do all that by hand it would never happen!

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11th Apr 2016, 7:46 PM

Odd May (Guest)

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I'm just going to comment to say that Achren has fingernails like Adele. And I love it.

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12th Apr 2016, 12:07 AM

Saeriellyn

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For the matter of that, Adele has a face that would do well for Achren. I wish I'd looked her up before I'd started!

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13th Apr 2016, 2:35 PM

joeyballast

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Be careful what you wish for!

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16th Apr 2016, 3:11 PM

Saeriellyn

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Always a wise adage. Taran, for example, wishing for adventure...

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15th Apr 2016, 7:17 PM

Guest

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you realize that almost all of the base for this book, is derived from the Disney movie: "the Black Cauldron" right?
right down to the names.

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15th Apr 2016, 7:36 PM

Saeriellyn

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I really, really hope you're joking, or a really good troll.

But if not: you realize Disney based The Black Cauldron on a book series, right? The same book series I'm adapting in this comic. The one I cite in my comic description, whose author I credit, and whose page on amazon I link to.

Disney's adaptation of it was so poor that I'm almost embarrassed you recognized it, though. Fail on my part.

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