Chapter Eleven: Cover
posted 25th May 2017, 1:43 AM
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6th Feb 2018, 9:18 PM
AmeliaP
I love how you did the last chapter and introduced the bard (again, I prefer your version):)
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7th Feb 2018, 6:55 PM
Saeriellyn
Over Disney's? Theirs is so awful it's hard NOT to improve him. He's a stand-in for the author as far as physical appearance, and that they turned him into a fat paunchy old man is just insulting.
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13th Feb 2018, 5:44 PM
AmeliaP
And dumb! Disney made him dumb as hell (I can tolerate a fat paunchy old man, but a dumb one? noooooooo!)
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